This was a book that had sat on my shelf for years before I finally picked it up to read it, and when I finally did I wish I had have read it earlier.
Not because it was a good book, but because it might not have been such a chore to read in the days before I had read much more than Twilight and Roald Dahl.
Tully had always lived my her father's strict rules: 'stay away from strangers', 'don't stay home alone' and 'never, ever go in the water' until a mysterious stranger arrives at her door and Tully discovers the secrets her father has been keeping from her. The novel promises to be a "gripping, heart-stopping thriller".
Geoff Havel's writing, in short is simplistic and dull. Particularly during the first few chapters (though it was scattered throughout) there was an overload of cliché imagery, which didn't flow with the rest of the work. Tully's mental voice was very repetitive, she only ever seemed to think the same things from chapter to chapter: "where is dad?" "why did he say that?" "what does bill want?" "it's not fair?" or some variation, also phrasing stupid questions "What did dad mean when he said I wouldn't drown?" She also frequently refreshed the readers memory about past events that happened as few as a few pages ago. She was not a particularly enjoyable character to read through.
The novel was very predictable and flat, lacking any plot twists or startling moments, which are generally required of "thrilling novels". The only part of the novel that even slightly resembled suspense was not until near the very end of the book (excluding Tully's 'great reveal', which was blatantly obvious, given the title and her father's 'rules') when Jack stifled "a gasp of horror" *end scene*.
Overall this was not a particularly enjoyable novel and the only reason I reached that last page was because I wanted to judge it fairly in this review. Premise wise it is not a horrible idea, but in this case it simply did not work. It's only saving grace is that it is targeted at a much younger age group than I (10-12), who may be more appreciative of the novel. It only get's 1/5, and probably wouldn't recommend this book to anyone over the age of, say, eight (though I have heard that it is required reading for some ESL students - I'm sorry).
My copy is going to the local book drive (for disadvantaged children) in hopes that someone will find joy within it's pages.
Sunday, December 23, 2012
Saturday, December 22, 2012
City of Bones - Cassandra Clare
I first read this book when I was fourteen and was not particularly keen on reading. Up until that point my shelf consisted of 'The Twilight Saga', and Roald Dahl (not that there is anything wrong with that) and I ADORED it. Jace was exactly the kind of boy my younger self wanted and I was happy to live vicariously through the characters.
Fifteen year old Clary Fray stumbles onto the shadow world, when during one of her trips to the Pandemonium Club when she bears witness to the murder of a young boy. Then the boy disappears. Clary hurdles head first into her otherworldly destiny in her home of Brooklyn. Shadowhunters, Demons, Downworlders and the secrets her mother had been hiding from her all her live, revealed. And then there is Jace the darkly, sexy shadowhunter boy determined to sink Clary further into his world. Clary is a headstrong young woman (when she is not weak in the knees for Jace) hell-bent on a mission to save her mother from what she, herself had been protected from her whole life.
Eighteen year old me is still not quite willing to part with it. I love the fast paced plot, the variation of personalities within the novel (even though Clare seems to share Clary's infatuation with Jace), I love the way the character's grew over the first three books, although secondary characters are almost ignored in the first novel. One of the things I love most about this series, which a lot of young adult books get wrong is the depth of reasoning behind the villain's actions. Valentine is not simply evil for the sake of being so, but he has a purpose and genuinely thinks he is doing what is right for his world.
While Clary is not my favourite female lead, she is far from terrible. The actions of most of the characters are realistic and believable. City of Bones is an enjoyable read and belongs on the shelf of newbies and avid readers alike of the teen romance persuasion.
3* (Because I save higher scores for the books I really, really like)\
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Fifteen year old Clary Fray stumbles onto the shadow world, when during one of her trips to the Pandemonium Club when she bears witness to the murder of a young boy. Then the boy disappears. Clary hurdles head first into her otherworldly destiny in her home of Brooklyn. Shadowhunters, Demons, Downworlders and the secrets her mother had been hiding from her all her live, revealed. And then there is Jace the darkly, sexy shadowhunter boy determined to sink Clary further into his world. Clary is a headstrong young woman (when she is not weak in the knees for Jace) hell-bent on a mission to save her mother from what she, herself had been protected from her whole life.
Eighteen year old me is still not quite willing to part with it. I love the fast paced plot, the variation of personalities within the novel (even though Clare seems to share Clary's infatuation with Jace), I love the way the character's grew over the first three books, although secondary characters are almost ignored in the first novel. One of the things I love most about this series, which a lot of young adult books get wrong is the depth of reasoning behind the villain's actions. Valentine is not simply evil for the sake of being so, but he has a purpose and genuinely thinks he is doing what is right for his world.
While Clary is not my favourite female lead, she is far from terrible. The actions of most of the characters are realistic and believable. City of Bones is an enjoyable read and belongs on the shelf of newbies and avid readers alike of the teen romance persuasion.
3* (Because I save higher scores for the books I really, really like)\
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Tuesday, November 6, 2012
NaNoWriMo
November is National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) and this is my first ever attempt at the challenge. The goal is to write 50 000 words in the single month of November, which I'm sure you can agree is no easy feat.
I have always been a girl who doesn't finish a thing. I have dozens of notebooks containing only the first chapter, or very first pages of a novel I know I will never finish. I don't believe I have ever filled a notebook in my life. I forever have ideas swirling around my head. I feed off of them, I plan the characters, I build fantasitcal worlds. I just have no plot to put them in, but I relish on it. This my friends is a phenomonon known as brain crack. And I am an adict.
For the first time I am determined to put myself in the line of fire, to finish something even if it's terrible; Even if something better comes along. I will finish this novel. And I love the challenge. Everyday when I hit that daily word goal I feel... (thrilled? exhilerated?) Only six days in this is already one of the most rewarding experiences of my life.
If you are attempting the moth of literary abandon, I wish you luck and commend you for your dedication. And you can add me as a writing buddy here. If you are not (and perhaps have never heard of NaNoWriMo before) you can click here for more information.
From Shayla, 12068 words
Review: Jasper Jones- Craig Silvey
Craig Silvey's Jasper Jones follows the story of thirteen year old Charlie Bucktin and his interactions with infamous town disgrace Japer Jones. Set during the Australian Summer of 1965, Charlie must deal with immortality and the prejudice of town life while questioning the minds and motives of serial killers ad the extent of his own involvement in crime.
Town sweetheart Laura Wisheart is discovered missing and the two boys, (Charlie and Jasper) seem to be the only people who hold the key to uncover the mystery.
A story of young romance, secrets, justice, regret and betrayal Jasper Jones is a powerful Australian novel and can be rightly placed beside classics by Harper Lee and Mark Twain. Silvey is a witty, fast paced and skillful writer. Every motive, character and behaviour was explainable and plausible, and every chapter was laced with moral conviction, racism and hypocrisy. I found it extremely difficult to put down and feel like a better person for just having read it.
You can find it on Amazon.com here, or enquire at your local bookstore.
4.5/5
Friday, October 19, 2012
Weight Loss and Babushka Dolls
This afternoon I was flicking through a copy of the Australian MADISON magazine (your typical, trashy beauty magazine). There was one article in particular that caught my attention, if only for the large image on the top of the page. If I'm being totally honest, Russian Nesting Dolls (Babushka Dolls) have drawn my attention for years (In fact I own a set myself), but it was the headline attached that made me want to write this post.
"Find Your Perfect Weight". And while I don't disagree with the content of the article, which encourages women to lose weight slowly, to assist with changing habits and keeping it off. Despite this one, tiny bit of criticism jumped to mind: 'I always thought the bigger one was the most beautiful anyway' and so much more intricate. So I guess the secret message in this is, in the words of Mika "Big Girls, You are beautiful!" But in all seriousness, don't strive for an ideal weight or size, strive for an ideal you. Strive for health.
It seems I am finally coming to the realisation that, even if I'm not a size 6-8 (Australian), a size 12 can be beautiful too.
Friday, September 14, 2012
Between the Lines (Spoiler Free)
By renowned author Jodi Picoult and her daughter Samantha Van Lee
What happens to the characters once a book has ended? What about when the book is closed?
What if the fairytale prince wanted to live happily ever after... with you?
Fifteen year old Delilah spends most of her time buried within a book to escape her own reality. When she discovers a rare fairytale with which she feels an overpowering attachment she delves deeper into the story only to find that Oliver, the fairytale prince that she has fallen in love with, loves her too. And he want out of the book and into the real world!
Told from three points of view (Oliver, Delilah, with parts of the 'fairytale'), Between the Lines was a charming love story that I just could not put down. The characters are both simple and yet, oddly complex; they are unbelievable and yet somehow relateable. So much of the novel was laugh-out-loud funny and I fell in love every time I turned the page. I felt that giddy fairytale feeling that I haven't felt since I read Hans Christian Andersen's The Tin Soldier. It draws the prefect line between reality and fantasy, combining the classic fairytale with a modern twist. The very premise is a fantasy that has played out in my mind so many times before, and has inspired fanfiction writers for as long as there have been stories to tell, What if this character could live on? (what if I could write Augustus Waters into my life?)
The book is full of gorgeously detailed images from 'the fairytale' as well as a scattering of splendid silhouettes (unintended alliteration) throughout the pages. I was completely and utterly charmed by this book (can you tell?). I have fallen completely under its spell.
A perfect blend of Inkheart (Cornelia Funke) and The Fault in Our Starts (John Green) this is a fantastic book that I would definitely recommend to everybody looking for a light, fun read.
For the 3rd time in the history of my personal book reviewing I give this book 5/5.
12+
A perfect blend of Inkheart (Cornelia Funke) and The Fault in Our Starts (John Green) this is a fantastic book that I would definitely recommend to everybody looking for a light, fun read.
For the 3rd time in the history of my personal book reviewing I give this book 5/5.
12+
Thursday, September 6, 2012
I Read my Brother's Diary
So, I ready my brother's diary. It is only two pages long and has not been written in for a decade (he was 5 years old at the time.) So I read it, and it was adorable.
I thought I would share with you The Diary of a Child #1 - UNEDITED (Note: you may not be able to understand a word of this if you do not speak fluent child, however, it does roughly resemble English.)
for my holidays I am going to raos Hill regunol parke (Rouse Hill Regional Park) and I am haveing lotst of fun and we are going to have a barder que
and I am haveing lost of fun and the flying fox is broken and some one pout an stike on it.
on fridgy I am staying with my mum an d my sistr is going to my grandmars hose and I will miss Shalyer (note: my name is spelt Shayla) and I love my sister.
now my step brofher is being mene to me at my dads hose I am rieding a book and my dad is skreming at my sister I love my dad and now ther is some peplo haveing a partey and I can her peplo screming
my step brother is now being nice to me and I am happy I love my family they are grat I love my mum dad steq brother and my step sister and my sister my sister is the best I love my family.
I swear this is the most adorable thing he has ever written. He is now fifteen and would die before ever saying he loved me.
I love you too Austin
See me and my brother in a YouTube video here
I thought I would share with you The Diary of a Child #1 - UNEDITED (Note: you may not be able to understand a word of this if you do not speak fluent child, however, it does roughly resemble English.)
for my holidays I am going to raos Hill regunol parke (Rouse Hill Regional Park) and I am haveing lotst of fun and we are going to have a barder que
and I am haveing lost of fun and the flying fox is broken and some one pout an stike on it.
on fridgy I am staying with my mum an d my sistr is going to my grandmars hose and I will miss Shalyer (note: my name is spelt Shayla) and I love my sister.
now my step brofher is being mene to me at my dads hose I am rieding a book and my dad is skreming at my sister I love my dad and now ther is some peplo haveing a partey and I can her peplo screming
my step brother is now being nice to me and I am happy I love my family they are grat I love my mum dad steq brother and my step sister and my sister my sister is the best I love my family.
I swear this is the most adorable thing he has ever written. He is now fifteen and would die before ever saying he loved me.
I love you too Austin
See me and my brother in a YouTube video here
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
Hello There
Long time, No see.
I have recently moved from my father's house and back in with my mother, so it has been difficult to do things on the internet lately. I haven't really been still enough to try. I'm moving again, with my mother, this time, into another house. So everything has been up in the air.
Hopefully I will get back into the swing of things and make more and hopefully more creative videos shortly. Until then, feel free to watch my older stuff, even if it's not great.
My brother and I are considering making a collaboration channel, possibly Vlogbrothers inspired (although, he has no idea who that is.)
Until next time.
I have recently moved from my father's house and back in with my mother, so it has been difficult to do things on the internet lately. I haven't really been still enough to try. I'm moving again, with my mother, this time, into another house. So everything has been up in the air.
Hopefully I will get back into the swing of things and make more and hopefully more creative videos shortly. Until then, feel free to watch my older stuff, even if it's not great.
My brother and I are considering making a collaboration channel, possibly Vlogbrothers inspired (although, he has no idea who that is.)
Until next time.
Wednesday, July 18, 2012
Sticky Note Strangers and Books
Hey Guys,
Here's my latest vlog. Go to youtube.com to comment and such. Please share, I would love for this to become a thing.
THANKS FOR WATCHING!
If you leave a sticky note somewhere interesting, I would love to hear about it! Become a Sticky Note Stranger!
Here's my latest vlog. Go to youtube.com to comment and such. Please share, I would love for this to become a thing.
THANKS FOR WATCHING!
If you leave a sticky note somewhere interesting, I would love to hear about it! Become a Sticky Note Stranger!
Saturday, July 7, 2012
10 Books that Changed Me
Parvana - Deborah Ellis
"Based closely on real life, this is an exciting and touching story of Parvana, a young girl growing up in Afghanistan,where the Taliban, members of an extreme religious group, rule most of the country with a heavy hand."I first read this book in 4th grade then again in 9th. It completely opened my eyes to the real, unfair world that exists outside of my safe an cushioned life in Australia. It was one of the first proper novels I read as a child and it deeply affected my understanding, and empathy on Australian immigrants both legal and otherwise. It is completely heart wrenching, and raw. It's sequel Parvana's Journey is not to be forgotten.
Looking For Alaska - John Green
Miles "Pudge" Halter's whole existance has been one big nonevent until he moves to Culver Creek Boarding School, and his life becomes the opposite of safe. Because down the hall is Alaska Young.
John Green is always a great author. This is his début, and my god is it amazing! He always creates impossibly real and relatable characters and deep and captivating stories. He draws you in. Then comes the huge earth shattering moment and nothing is ever the same!
This book is written like a classic, and I loved it! It encouraged me to take a second look at the prescribed reading in English class and really appreciate them. It was also the best characterisation I have ever seen, and I have since endeavoured to create the same emotional realism that John Green has created so well
Also he makes awesome YouTube videos
"Winnie had often been haunted by visions of what it would be like to be kidnapped. But none of her visions had been like this, with her kidnappers just as alarmed as she herself was..."
This is a children's novel. An absolutely amazing children's novel, and a classic. It is set in the fictional town of Treegap, I am unsure as of when, but if I had to guess I'd say maybe the late 1800s. This is a delightfully charming love story about a wealthy young girl, who longs to be free and a poor boy and his family who share a dark secret. Romance, freedom, friendship and immortality. Thought provoking, thought it may not be a pressing issue, I'd rather be part of the wheel, than a rock stuck on the side of the stream.
Who hasn't read at least one Roald Dahl book. This is one of the best and probably one of the most popular. For those who haven't read it, it's about a young girl named Matilda who is surrounded by abuse, both at home with her parents who just don't understand her and at school in her evil head mistress Miss Trunchbull. It's a children's book and despite it's themes is a light an amusing read.
I was six years old when I read this book, or had it read to me, and I adored Miss Honey. Ever since I have aspired to be a teacher, although I now know it is unlikely if not impossible to get a class as delightful as Miss Honey's and therefore be half as charming, it is still where I want to be. This book, apparently, set the course for my future.
Emily Rodda is probably best known for her Deltora Quest, and Rowan of Rin books. I absolutely admire her talent to create flawless and magical worlds, the world of Rondo is no exception. I don't really know what to say about this one. Cousins Leo and Mimi find themselves tansported via Music Box to a world where Fairy Tales exist and they are hunted by the Blue Queen and haunted by their family legacy.
This is where my passion for writing children's books comes from. Prior to this I wrote for my own age, but I love the creation of worlds were everything is possible and the idea of a perfect escape from the reality of this world when you need it most. This is a comfort that can usually only be found in a children's book. A must read for all children!
Yep, John Green again. I will never look at people with missing limbs again. I can't describe exactly how, but this is just not another cancer story. This is John Green's absolute best novel, by far. I devoured it in a day. There is not much more I can say without ruining it, but it is definitely a must read.
While it was not about Esther Earl, an amazing Nerdfighter who passed, it definitely carries her essence. RIA.
If you are going to read only one thing on this this, just make it this one, okay?
And the rest of the Narnia series. This was one of the first novels I ever read, and probably is what made me want to become a children's writer and is still a source of inspirations. I've read it too many times to count and bought a copy for every child I've ever babysat.
For those that don't know it is about 4 children who are forces to move far away from home because of the war, and find themselves in an enormous house under the guardianship of a strange, introverted man. The youngest child, Lucy, finds her way into the amazing world of Narnia while playing a game of "Hide and Seek" with her siblings. And so begins the grand adventure of prophecy, danger and magic. And don't forget the talking animals. Aslan will always be one of the most amazing characters in children's literature.
I have always been a huge fan of Hans Christian Andersen's Fairy Tales. I used to google them when I was a child, and had a "pocket" edition of some of my favourites. My mum bought me this "Wordsworth" edition of his complete works for my fifteenth birthday and I adore it. It is a direct translation of the original so it has not been "disneyfied" or watered down for children. I have learnt so much from these stories, more then I could say in a blog post or a YouTube video.
The Book Thief - Markus Zusak
This book was recommended to me by the lovely ladies in my local bookshop, and Thank God for that! This book got me through the Germany component of my Modern History Course. I kept placing Liesel in the textbook, and brought it to life. Markus Zusak is a very talented writer, creating brilliant and intricate characters, and unique narration.
The novel is set in Nazi Germany where a young girl named Liesel is placed with a foster family. It chronicals the life of Liesel, her love for books and how much her life changed when her (German) family hide Max (a Jew) in their basement.
I don't really know why this is on the list, I barely remember the storyline, but I remember adoring it as a child and reading it over and over again. And even as I jotted down every book that has ever affected me, I just kept coming back to it. (I actually stole my copy from the school library when I was 10)
It is about a young girl, who is forced by her family to move to a strange town, where strange things occur and she starts to make friends she never dreamed she would have.
So, that's all for today... This is related to a video on my YouTube channel.
So check that out of you haven't already. Thank you, and Welcome to my new blog.
Shayla.
*Book covers: Australian. Taken from the authors own websites. Thanks*
*Book covers: Australian. Taken from the authors own websites. Thanks*
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